Just Need a Hug - Storyboard Vison 4

 

After showed to some classmates, I decided to pull off the narration, but only let the frame tell the whole story. 

The two changes are:

1. memory - when Jinne's friends gather on the street, Jinne looks back at the countdown running competition poster and sighs. Then move into the running shoot

2. the last part of memory, Jinne running, writing, and playing piano, will from normal speed to the faster speed. It will bring the intensive up as Jinne cannot stand that life anymore.

Although I pull off the narration, the narration slows down my story's rhythm. As Rachel (my lovely tutor) said, for the emotional piece of work, I'd better give enough time to the audience.  The audience could affect or feel the emotion from the animation better. 

The other suggestion from Rachel, keep the whole scene's colour moody and dull, which is more suited to my animation's mood. Also, more focus on Jinne.